I love how its based in Minnesota. I'm from the minnatoka area so its great reading a story that's set were I grew up. :) I hope you update soon I love oli sykes storeys I read your other one too.it was great:)
Oh my!!!... This is great so far!! I love how this is put in when Oliver was younger!! {。^◕‿◕^。} Keep up the good work! Update soon! Yeah? ♡ BeccaSykes
So I haven't commented on this for decades.. I'M SORRY! For some reason I wasn't getting messages updates? It's briliant, though. I feel sorry for Taylor and really hope something works with this Monica chick. He needs to move on from Coralie. I Los everyhing though. Oli is incredible and got they're just so cute together! I almost died during the late scene, haha. Can't wait for an update! xx
This is a great story by the way, the first time I read it I couldn't get into it but I tried it again and ive subscribed! Keep up the amazing updates x
The whole situation with Oli's mom barging into his bedroom because she thought he was taking advantage of Coralee literally made me die. XD but I came back to life to finish reading the rest of the chapter! I liked Taylor more in this chapter. Hopefully, Monica keeps him from getting so jealous again! I love this story so much so keep writing it! Update soon! : )
I love this story! Oliver is just so cute. I'm going to be honest here: I'm not a fan of Taylor at all. Collins is my favorite character! She makes me laugh. Update soon! : )
I've finally caught up on this story and I totally adore it! I actually really like your style of writing and I think you really nailed the characters, it's lovely to see how this story develops, with just enough insight to her life to help the reader identify with her and just that little drama going on here and there. Although it's not one of those stories where constant drama is going on, you keep it interesting at a level where I am curious as to what happens next. I am really interested in how this is going to develop! Good job!