Brother - Comments

woah that was weird but it was really good and hoooootttttttttttttttt:D

Ooh ... c:

That was so hotttt!! Pls consider continuing. Pls and thanks

loved it:D

AWWH, I loved it. The end was so sweet and the whole thing was damn sexy ;) Skyee, Im so proud.

I just finished reading.. O.o That was hot :3
I love your stories :D

I love your writing :)

I agree with the first comment completely, but would also like to add that their parents seem slightly oblivious as well, or maybe thats how it came across for me. In any case, good story, nice idea. :)

You're my hero. Wanna know why?
You called a boner a chubby.
I've never heard that one before :3
I shall be using it in regular conversation from now on

Hey, Don't call any of my readers a bitch just because they gave their opinion.
She gave her opinion in a decent way instead of being a bitch about it so no, she's not a bitch. T.T

the comment above is a *cough*bitchhhhh*cough*

anywho
I LOVEEEE IT

at least i got to read a part first
so now what bitches
yeaa i'm special >:DDDDDDD

now Skye
we all know your a good writer :c ♥
your amazing and cute <.<

lmfao but sorry to inform you that im gonna kill all the 27 readers T___T

Alright. I'm not a fan of slash, but that's not going to sway my opinion. I think you've got a good idea going here. It's a nice length, well written. But perhaps consider making it a little more..I don't know, professional? The first sentence 'I didn't know why, I just knew I liked things being up my butt.' just didn't seem to go with the serious-ness of the the original idea. I don't know if you were intending on having it put across as a comical sort of thing or not. But that was just my opinion.

Otherwise, I think this story can really go places if it's written well enough.