Till Death Do Us Part - Comments

I really like this story, it's interesting and I haven't read anything else like it. You've got some great talent. I like the background but then as I was trying to read I had to turn it off because I couldn't concentrate between the background picture and the white on black. Also, you use words like thou and art but don't actually use the entire old language, only parts of it. I found that inconsistent and distracting as well. I think using the old language for the purpose of setting and time is fantastic, I'm all for accuracy...I would just try to be a bit more accurate.

Otherwise, writing wise, I liked this.

I really like the layout. Its a bit blinding though, since its black. But the story was amazing. Nothing was expected. I really like it. I really love witch trials so I have a strange attraction to this dark theme.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.

That was cute in a really sad way. :3
I love the whole witch trail thing, too. I have always been a fan of those crazy trials that people took so seriously back in the old days.
The layout is cool, and I like how you put the dialect in there.
And like I said, just too cute, but sad. I like that they end up together, because it just makes everything better even though it really should be sad.
But good job :3

First, I like the picture for the layout. It's interesting...

Second, I like how this is written. Both the speech and the way it's spaced out. I have a prediction for the end and I'm hoping it's right. I'll just have to wait and see. (:

i love this story! can't wait to see the ending

i like this :)

I like it so far :), the on;y problem is the font and its size. It was quite hard to read and took me longer then normal. But other then that i think it is a great story.