Pretty Little Things. - Comments

Amazing! I absolutely love this story! :) At first I was confused on where exactly you were going with this and I love how you wrote this. Your description is brilliant and you've created a great feeling for the character. Plus, you are an excellent writer. Wonderful story!

I like how short your summary is. It doesn’t give away anything yet it still makes you want to read more. Good job. You are very descriptive which is really good. The description words chosen for this add to the story. It helps create the image. This is very well written. Good job and keep up the good work.

I...Uh...wow...That was great. Really wonderfully written :D. It's the first thing I've read on this site, as I just joined no more than five minutes ago, and it definitely gave an awesome impression as to what kind of writers are here. It was amazing, and I could definitely feel the way that Ginny was feeling throughout it. Great job.

This is absolutely incredible.
So much detail, I could picture it easily, and almost feel it.
Great job!! (: