you deff need to make a sequel to this since it's so good. I really like it and i'm wondering if brian will ever realize what the watermellon smell and taste is.
you should deffo make a sequel!!! coz this - (points at story while giving you a look) was so awesome! That i wanted to just be like, in this story and e like, being the creepy synacky stalker that i am and do lots of synacky fangirl stuff.....(smiles innocently while hiding pen, notepad and camera behind back, eyes shifting nervously)