Holy shit... I love this! Why aren't your stories active anymore?! I used to love to read your stuff! Just like this; this is absolutely beautifully written! I wish you would start again :(
This broke my heart you know. It was really, really amazing, sincere, and nicely detailed. I liked almost every bit of it because of how realistic and well written it was. The only thing I didn't favor was the part where he just knew something was wrong in the house. Normally people don't just walk into their house and no something is wrong without any sign, without looking around or seeing something off. Not usually a feeling, but eh, I went with it.
This story really was nice and I'm surprised it doesn't have more comments telling you how amazing of a writer you are. I truly enjoyed reading this piece dearie. :) <33