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  • Written-Amaya

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    Hey Readers! I am in the process of editing chapter one's begining to be a little more descriptive. I hope that you will like it when I post it. Also I have been making small changes through out the chapter too.
    Happy reading!
    August 29th, 2013 at 05:23pm
  • Rorzshach

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    hiiiiiiiiii il loove ur story!!!
    wonderful
    keep it up!!!
    November 13th, 2008 at 10:05am
  • Rorzshach

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    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.......
    me loves ur storyy...
    its wonderful XD
    October 8th, 2008 at 06:59pm
  • Written-Amaya

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    funny haha! i am still working out some of the names
    February 2nd, 2008 at 09:03pm
  • Cheshire_Panda_Amy

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    I'm not sure I'm really supposed to be on the computer now...BUT!

    The story moves at a timely pace. It's fast enough the reader doesn't have too much time to get bored, but slow enough that they can't get lost in plot progression. The preface was also a nice touch.

    As you continue you writing, you may like to add a *little* more description, seeing as the book's mostly dialogue.

    Old Man Bob? *laughs hystercially* Don't ask...don't ask...
    February 2nd, 2008 at 01:52am
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