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  • Synyster Gates;

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    LOVE THIS
    July 22nd, 2012 at 03:47pm
  • sullenriotxx

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    OMG UPDATE!!!And she freaking should fall for him (eventually) screw what other people say!!! This is a terrific stoyr and I really hope you update soon! Seriously,you are a great writer! More please!!!
    July 22nd, 2012 at 11:27am
  • Dusk Dawn

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    this is interesting. Do proceed.
    March 5th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • CJNS

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    Love it! Update?!
    February 5th, 2012 at 11:51am
  • paracosm.

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    LOVE. YOUR. STORY.
    LOVE. DAMON. SALVATORE.
    Update Please! *Subscribed*
    Dea, x
    December 1st, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • cadleigh96

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    Oh my gosh. This is really great! An update soon would be awesome!! I'm dying to read the rest!
    November 4th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • ShuperGurl143

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    amazing.....update asap
    September 30th, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • Ian.Somerhalder

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    love it!!!! update plz !!! x
    September 4th, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • sophiewoods11

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    more please!!!
    April 19th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • INFJSlytherin

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    I love the story concept and characters. The only criticism i would have is run on sentences. However, thats easily fixed. Keep up the great work!!!
    March 29th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • xohunnyxo

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    This story is pretty cool. I love Vamp Diaries.
    March 28th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • sarcasm4ever

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    WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE THE NEXT ONE!!!
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • InsanityAtBest

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    I really like how smart she is. Great story, especially since I'm left wanting more. Update soon?
    March 27th, 2011 at 01:54am
  • ninjaturtle-tori

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    this isn't bad. There is a lot lackin' the description portion, but other than that it is a solid story line. Though I don't understand what was up with the random chocolate? The humor was very useful though, and a great device.

    Not bad overall. :D
    March 27th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Psh I'm not even entirely sure I'd want to escape! Great story sorry it took so long for me to comment I just got done reading it! (Life and work kept interupting!)
    March 26th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • unrequitedlove2014

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    This is an amazing story!!! KEEP WRITING PLEASE!
    March 25th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • Nanook

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    Hm... I like it. :) This is a good story, and I definitely think you should continue. :) Can't wait for more! :D
    Definitely... subscribed! :D
    March 24th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • bethaneycare

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    oooooo i really like the story so far. i did click on the "don't pust button" damn you. nifty trick though.
    seriously carry on this story it's great :)
    March 23rd, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • livelifetolove

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    Even though I don't usually read these stories....
    I LOVE THIS ONE!
    So far the only criticism I have is that I'm confused on how she knew he was a vampire so fast and why he kidnapped her in the first place, but I'm sure you'll explain that later on. Can't wait for more!

    -Mariah
    March 23rd, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Keezy Cullen

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    Every Interesting, Cant Wait 2 See Where U Go Wit This Story. Keep Up The Good Work
    March 22nd, 2011 at 10:54pm
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