I love this story. I'm totally putting the link to it on my profile. You're amazing at writing<3 you should check out my contests (the links are at the bottom of my about). You'd be great at that
i just finished reading the entire thing, i couldnt stop reading until i was completely finished, i LOVED it! :) i love the way you made the characters, it was perfect <3 now im gonna start reading the next one :D
I'm pretty sure this story's already done, but I am only on Chapter 13... The part where Joyce walks in on Jack, and Abbie.. And let me tell you, I'm a very "shameless" person, and I can't recall a time when I've ever been embarassed in my life, but I read that, and I got so fucking embarassed for them! I put my laptop screen down some, and I just had my hand over my mouth, and was like sitting here laughing.. at midnight when I'm supposed to be sleeping... Oh well.. I'll read more tomorrow...
omg i love Zack now :P i also love Jack i just noticed there names rhyme xD but i do love this story! its fucking epic!! i would defo buy this if it was a book (i would be able to read it in bed then rather than stay in the living room till 4 in the morning :P)
oh my god no :'( borderline tears right now! They can't split up D': Can't Lisa not just like move under a rock or something and leave so that Abs and Poppy can stayyy!! :'( In other words, an amazing chapter :) Can't wait for the new update and the sequel of course. <3