Whatever It Takes - Comments

I just started reading and finished in one day! I like them together and your writing is fine. But where does the story go now?

Hey! I really like what I've read so far! But your paragraphs aren't broken up properly and it detracts from your writing. Every time a somebody else speaks, you should start a new paragraph. It's easier to read and is an actual grammar rule. I don't want to sound like a mega bitch (because I'm really not i promise) I just really want to get into and enjoy this story but it so difficult to read these dense chunks of text. The story is good, and silly things like this shouldn't stop readers from enjoying it! :)

OMG!!! This story was fantastic!! I am crying like a maniac at work - what a way to finish, my heart was breaking for the both of them. Can't wait for the sequel!! :)

Ahh!!! Yay !!! So happy for the update and wow that must of been the hardest thing Ari had to do maybe just maybe now Patrick will realize that he can't keep doing this to her, he's breaking her down emotionally and mentally. I just hope that IF they get back together in the sequel that Patrick is completely for her and no one else! Love it <3

Can't wait for the sequel! I love this story:)

This was so sad but I completely agree with her decision. There was no trust left. Everytime he wasn't with her she would be worried he was with someone else and that is no way to have a relationship and that is no way to live. I hope maybe they can work something out and maybe find a way to fix the relationship in the sequel because I really believe they love each other. Maybe if the sequel is like a few years in the future and they both grew up a little or something.

That was so sad :( love the last chapter though and can't wait for the new story!

I just read this whole story in like 2 hours! It's so amazing!! I'm sad now...

Aww how sad...oh well hope you update soon!!!

I seen the the email and thought wait what "Whatever it takes" is updated did I subscribe to another story called Whatever it takes hahaha LOVE IT <3 and happy for the update but an so sad to see that Patrick haven't changed his ways and poor Arianna, her heart has been broken so many times by Patrick and they are probably not getting back together :( and I cant believe it is end its breaking my heart but I still love it <3 and I'm looking forward to the new story!!!!! :)

Ah can I just say that I did not like this chapter at all, but I know you had to write it anyways. Love the update and I can't believe this story will be ending soon, but I am looking forward to the new story!

Ah can I just say that I did not like this chapter at all, but I know you had to write it anyways. Love the update and I can't believe this story will be ending soon, but I am looking forward to the new story!

So happy for this update!! been waiting forever for it haha I love it <3

Love the update my dear, but I am sad that it is coming to an end :(

Sad that it's coming to an end, but great work! One of my favorites by far :) Also excited to read any other stories you may write!

So cute! You for sure have me hooked:)

Glad you're back!! Awesome update, although I'm sad that it's ending soon :(

OMG! girl I love that you are back I have been missing this story, I love the chapter they are really cute together! and I hope your family member is okay and feeling better <3

Love that you are back!!! I absolutely loved the update, they are adorable and I'm glad everything is going good :) update soon!

oh ps that was the longest comment I've ever written on a story so you should feel loved. lmao