This is so cool. I like the way you write it and the story line sounds original (to the best of my knowledge). The way you display the characters and cover the background at the same time is really good. I'm glad that it's not rushed or drawn out too long like some other stories I've seen. I'm still waiting to see what happens so just to let you know.
~Mona
February 15th, 2008 at 03:29am
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