Call It Princely - Comments

Sick little boy isn't he? I can't say I'm happy only because the story is pretty sad but you describe everything and just like in the other s stories I do like that. It's the main reason I read stories. You do have my attention and I'm wondering what will happen next. Nice job, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I love the simple layout and I love how you started off the story. I like how you started straight into describing what illegal substances were right in front of him. The reader immediately knows he has a drug/drinking problem and they are compelled to read more.
:D

I love how you are so elaborate with the descriptions and it was really very realistic. His emotions in this are so raw, so realistic, that it just seems to seep through and I honestly felt them all.

Well done <3

This was a really great story for imagery.

I'm a little lost in it, and I don't understand what's going on. I don't know the characters name, his relationships with others are unclear, and the only thing I know about his personality is that it's entirely screwed. If that's what you are aiming at (which I think you are) congratulations.

Really well written.

Throughout the story, I could picture all the horrible drinks and drugs lined up. I got a sickening feeling just thinking about it. Your imagery and details are stunning and it was wire realistic. I have not read the prequel so many questions came up.

I do not know the boy doing the drugs or the other character that old him to clean it up or else. But I Sense that the prequel is just as well written as this. So I shall check it out. Good work :))

Wow. I really liked this. Your writing style is good, except for a few grammar mistakes. But everyone makes those, so fuck that. I don't usually read stories like this, but I really appreciate your writing, so I'm going to read your prequel. I didn't know it existed until after I finished this. Blind as a bad I am! Sorry. But yes. I will subscribe, and I will make sure to follow this like crazy. I love your writing, again.

Have a lovely day. And I'm sorry for the delay on commenting!

Not my cup of tea for a story, but it is a nice concept for a story.

First of all, I'm so sorry for the delay, but I'm glad that I got some time to read this (: Onto the review!
Chapter 1: Boy's a bit of a mess, eh? I want to give him a hug :( I remember reading only a few chapters of the prequel and I honestly don't remember much about it, so I'll have to read that again, haha! Anyways, I like how gritty and raw this chapter is. It made me sad, however, with the drug addiction :(
Chapter 2: Classy, girly, realllll classy xD Wait, so...they're having a threesome? And he basically raped the other boy. Okay. I was a bit disturbed there, but I read a few too many horrific paperback romances, so this sex scene, I won't lie, was much better than those fluffy, cheesy ones. And...oh, my God, he tries to kill himself?! Oh, God, I hope he doesn't succeed!
Chapter 3: Okay, I'm hooked. Officially.

Yes, I'm hooked. And I'm subbing to this. This was amazing and wonderful and I'm discouraged to see that you have so few comments on this masterpiece. Really, it deserves much more love. (: Amazing job! <3

I think that I need to read the first series in order to better critique this. But I enjoyed your narrative in the first and second chapters, particularly the parts about drug usage. The mention of absinthe made me excited as well. I thought the first chapter was a little short though.

I laughed when I saw that you'd given me a sequel to read. :3

This is written incredibly well. Your emotions are extremely vivid and I honestly felt them all, and pictured all of the imagery in my head. I love how mature and fluid your writing is, and how you've opened up the story so slowly but have made it so enthralling that it's impossible not to keep going.
The ending to that second chapter was heartbreaking; even more so because of the words you used to describe it. Brilliant job <3

Brilliant as always darlin!!

I liked this so much I subscribed I enjoy reading things where you can start at the sequel and not be confused but then it makes you want to see what happened before that... I'm at the first stage now lets see if you can get me all the way through as your writing for this comes in =]

A little mistake
ANd he needed to be destroyed.
I'm subscribing. :)
What a horrible world he's in, I love how you have written it and I was drawn in from the start.

Keep up the good work :)

I love it and the fact that it is told from Wesley's p.o.v. :]