August 4th, 2014 at 05:33am
I'll Never Let You Go - Comments
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Hey sweets- chapter 10 and 11 are exactly the same. I liked the chapter, but it wasn't quite enough. It wasn't satisfying. I want more, in other words. Something longer with a bit of action and a bit of a surprise. I loved the outfits- I need a blouse like that now. NEED. Hm...remind me again if I'm supposed to be Aria? I didn't think so, but I can't completely recall.July 2nd, 2014 at 08:59am
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Yes, you are!!! But I forgive you...or I will, once I get my update! Blah blah, finals. You're on here anyway, so you might as well update~ :P you need to get hooked on one of my stories, so I can torture you back and you can pester me for updates, for once!April 23rd, 2014 at 06:03am
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@ celestial_royalty
Haha, yeah, I'm here. Trying to catch up on a few things so I can have the story mapped out how I want it. You'll be in there very, very, very soon! I have finals next week and am studying for those. I have two chapters wrote out and have to do final edits before I post them. I know, I know, I'm a terrible person :/April 23rd, 2014 at 05:59am -
Miss "back in action"...are you there?April 23rd, 2014 at 04:48am
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@ stephaniek
Thank you! I am so swamped with college and work the passed year. I've been writing the next few chapters and I'm not sure how much I love them yet. I don't want to give my readers crap like I did with Zack's chapter. I hate being rushed.
But honestly, I will try to put something out by March 10th.February 16th, 2014 at 07:58am -
Keep it up I love ur story. Is good updated soon plz when u have chance tooFebruary 15th, 2014 at 10:45pm
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Aww.December 25th, 2012 at 12:23pm
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Kinda disappointed with the chapter. Funny that the last comment was mine too- I just looked down and read it out of curiosity. Do you ever actually plan on adding me in there or was I just wasting my time with all those messages? I do wanna know. The chapter itself...just didn't have much substance. Nothing new, nothing unexpected. And I know from your previous writing that you can do better.September 4th, 2012 at 08:07am
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Not too many errors but I did see a "bed the one to ruin this relationship" or something instead of 'be'. And, um, there better be HELL to pay- an affair in SCARLET'S house?! NO fucking way they can get away with it! They don't have to die but they better fucking suffer. (or you will- I will hunt you down, stone you, feed you to evil vampires, etc etc!) Maybe cut off half of Aria's hair in her sleep- ouch that would be mean but...well, so is sleeping with someone's husband while being aware of the facts. So no remorse.
I think stripping Zack of all his clothes and money and throwing him out with a bad beating might suffice for a while. Let me know what ya think. And I can't wait for more!!!January 18th, 2012 at 05:52am -
OH DAMN.
OH. DAMN.
I'd cut that bitch right there XD
I kind of like the idea of Edward and her still.... :)January 18th, 2012 at 01:18am -
I'm actually on Team Edward! :D lol And I really
dislike Aria. She gets on my nerves.. >.>
But yeah, Team Edward 1 Team Zack -2313431
<3January 18th, 2012 at 12:35am -
What the heck is up with Edward? Alice is very in-character. I like that. Zack is an asshole, as always, and there's clearly more to the nomad thief creepo than meets the eye. Maybe the stalker wants to kill Aria...heheheJanuary 2nd, 2012 at 09:36pm
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Hm... I like her and Edward... that's kind of a nice combo :)
ZACK NEEDS TO WAKE HIS SORRY ASS UP, AND REALIZE WHAT HE'S MISSING OUT ON.
That is all :)January 2nd, 2012 at 07:19am -
AW MAN. I was hoping that Zack would've seen her
with Edward and got jealous x)
<3January 2nd, 2012 at 04:47am -
I can't wait for moreee :D
I really don't like Aria... and Zack's being a bitch XDJanuary 2nd, 2012 at 02:02am -
I didn't comment on the last chapter? Whaat. Ok well clearly Zack is being a douchebag- somebody slap him! Hopefully Scarlet and Alice will have some good quality time and we can get some more insight as to who broke into the houseDecember 31st, 2011 at 10:43pm
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I honestly can't wait till she gets with Edward.
But then again, I feel like you're not gonna let them.. lol
<3December 31st, 2011 at 05:36pm -
Haha well I'm glad you're back :)
DAMN, are they just going to fight/make up in every chapter?? XDNovember 24th, 2011 at 04:05am -
They have quite an interesting relationship XD
I can't wait for moree <3 :DMay 14th, 2011 at 04:44pm
I know, they weren't really the best of chapters. I could write a million and one excuses as to why but I honestly have lost a lot of my inspirations the past year or so. I apologize to not only you, but to everyone who has the same feeling.
Also, you are not Aria, you are a new friend and a werewolf love interest ;)