I'll Never Let You Go - Comments

@ celestial_royalty
I know, they weren't really the best of chapters. I could write a million and one excuses as to why but I honestly have lost a lot of my inspirations the past year or so. I apologize to not only you, but to everyone who has the same feeling.

Also, you are not Aria, you are a new friend and a werewolf love interest ;)

Hey sweets- chapter 10 and 11 are exactly the same. I liked the chapter, but it wasn't quite enough. It wasn't satisfying. I want more, in other words. Something longer with a bit of action and a bit of a surprise. I loved the outfits- I need a blouse like that now. NEED. Hm...remind me again if I'm supposed to be Aria? I didn't think so, but I can't completely recall.

Yes, you are!!! But I forgive you...or I will, once I get my update! Blah blah, finals. You're on here anyway, so you might as well update~ :P you need to get hooked on one of my stories, so I can torture you back and you can pester me for updates, for once!

@ celestial_royalty
Haha, yeah, I'm here. Trying to catch up on a few things so I can have the story mapped out how I want it. You'll be in there very, very, very soon! I have finals next week and am studying for those. I have two chapters wrote out and have to do final edits before I post them. I know, I know, I'm a terrible person :/

Miss "back in action"...are you there?

@ stephaniek
Thank you! I am so swamped with college and work the passed year. I've been writing the next few chapters and I'm not sure how much I love them yet. I don't want to give my readers crap like I did with Zack's chapter. I hate being rushed.
But honestly, I will try to put something out by March 10th.

Keep it up I love ur story. Is good updated soon plz when u have chance too

Aww.

Kinda disappointed with the chapter. Funny that the last comment was mine too- I just looked down and read it out of curiosity. Do you ever actually plan on adding me in there or was I just wasting my time with all those messages? I do wanna know. The chapter itself...just didn't have much substance. Nothing new, nothing unexpected. And I know from your previous writing that you can do better.

Not too many errors but I did see a "bed the one to ruin this relationship" or something instead of 'be'. And, um, there better be HELL to pay- an affair in SCARLET'S house?! NO fucking way they can get away with it! They don't have to die but they better fucking suffer. (or you will- I will hunt you down, stone you, feed you to evil vampires, etc etc!) Maybe cut off half of Aria's hair in her sleep- ouch that would be mean but...well, so is sleeping with someone's husband while being aware of the facts. So no remorse.

I think stripping Zack of all his clothes and money and throwing him out with a bad beating might suffice for a while. Let me know what ya think. And I can't wait for more!!!

OH DAMN.
OH. DAMN.

I'd cut that bitch right there XD
I kind of like the idea of Edward and her still.... :)

I'm actually on Team Edward! :D lol And I really
dislike Aria. She gets on my nerves.. >.>

But yeah, Team Edward 1 Team Zack -2313431

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What the heck is up with Edward? Alice is very in-character. I like that. Zack is an asshole, as always, and there's clearly more to the nomad thief creepo than meets the eye. Maybe the stalker wants to kill Aria...hehehe

Hm... I like her and Edward... that's kind of a nice combo :)

ZACK NEEDS TO WAKE HIS SORRY ASS UP, AND REALIZE WHAT HE'S MISSING OUT ON.

That is all :)

AW MAN. I was hoping that Zack would've seen her
with Edward and got jealous x)

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I can't wait for moreee :D
I really don't like Aria... and Zack's being a bitch XD

I didn't comment on the last chapter? Whaat. Ok well clearly Zack is being a douchebag- somebody slap him! Hopefully Scarlet and Alice will have some good quality time and we can get some more insight as to who broke into the house

I honestly can't wait till she gets with Edward.
But then again, I feel like you're not gonna let them.. lol

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Haha well I'm glad you're back :)
DAMN, are they just going to fight/make up in every chapter?? XD

They have quite an interesting relationship XD

I can't wait for moree <3 :D