Homepage › Stories › Control › Comments

Control - Comments

  • bashful

    bashful (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    85
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    You're welcome :) I think it's a good idea not to go cold-turkey. Just adapt it to the situation, character etc. and like phobophobic said, stick with what's comfortable to you. Good chapter! :D
    February 28th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • dig up her bones.

    dig up her bones. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Estonia
    Yes, exactly. It's a bit too formal, yet again it's a narrator who can be whoever. So stick with what's comfortable to you, it was nice to read. c:
    Aaand I'm quite interested in it since I haven't watched Skins. Subscribed.
    February 27th, 2011 at 12:38pm
  • bashful

    bashful (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    85
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    I like it formal but I guess you could change it depending on who the chapter's about... Does that even make sense? Not sure... Oh well, I think this story has potential - I liked it! :)
    February 27th, 2011 at 12:02pm
Homepage › Stories › Control › Comments