Hey. Interesting story. Apart from the fact that there are HEAPS of errors etc., the story has an interesting tang to it, like why is she kissing (aka, having fallen in love with him) a known vampire that tried to rape and kill her, and letting him sleep in her bed that night? :) Interesting. And btw, in the author's note at the bottom, you don't usually divulge secrets like his name. Just a little tip :) Look forward to reading more.
May 2nd, 2011 at 04:38am