Wouldn't Have it any Other Way - Comments

I hope you update this sooooooon. <3

MORE!!!! pleassssseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):):):)

sincerely,

imaNERD!getitright!

♥a.k.a. Aubrey Rose!♥

Definitely continue, yeah?

The plot of the story sounds really interesting even though this is only the first chapter. A few things that bugged me was there were a few grammar mistakes, and the paragraph spacing. There should be one more space in between the paragraphs to make the content a bit easier to read. Other than that, this story seems like it is going to be really good.

The whole idea of the story sounds quite interesting to me. I was pleasantly surprised to see it was Mr. Gaskarth <3 I've only read a few stories where the main characters go off on a type of "roadtrip to no where" so to speak and they've been quite enjoyable to read.

The name of your character - Pyra - is so pretty (: and she has almost a lovable personality to her that draws me in. She's so....typical. Like, I could see most people all flustered how suddenly someone is with them in their room and telling them they're going on a cross-country roadtrip. Ha-ha!

You had a few spelling errors (you wrote 'beggin' instead of 'begging') and you forgot periods in some areas like after the last sentence. Grammar was a small issue as well and, it's just me, but the banner bothered my eyes a bit because of the brightness of the yellow. (This is of course coming from someone with highly sensitive eyes but still XDD)

So, overall, I like the whole idea of it. There's just the spelling/grammar/conventions issue and the layout but otherwise it looks like quite and interesting story :D

I reeeeeeally liked this xD
Update soon please :]

I really like this <3

I like it <3 <3 <3 <3