This is so cute and really sweet. It just makes me smile so much at how young and innocent they are. I really like this and can't wait for more. Update soon. <3
This is really sweet! I love the way you are writing this - "We..." "We..." - It's a really interesting writing style, great technique and works really well! Great update! Can't wait for more :D
Oh my God *-* I can't even stand how cute this is. It made me feel all warm inside :) they're so cute and naive. It's really good. I really liked it :) and I hope you go on soon :D
"We really do believe in doggy heaven." Awh, the innocence of a child. <3 This is amazing, I really can't wait to see what the twist/plot is going to be... have a feeling it will be original - like your stories always are. Can't wait for more!
Holy crap this is adorable :3 I'm guessing/hoping there will be more chapters because you said "through the years'' or whatnot. I can't wait to see how the rest of the years play out!
I never, EVER read Frikey's, but because of you, I'm subscribing and waiting for more. It'll probably be one of my favorite stories, just like Marble House, even though I told you that I don't like vampirestories.
You are so amazing. You have amazing ideas and amazing plots. I have never read anything like this - and I've probably said that you every one of your stories. Gosh! Reading the lives of out three favorite guys as kids was so funny. I smiled a lot through the whole chapter. I mean, who's ever written about a whole day with Frankie, Mikes and Gee as kids? Jesus, you are truly amazing.
I can't wait for more. I love it, and as I said, I subscribed.
I love a good Frikey from time to time, and I love the pov of this - so adorable! <3 Can absolutely not wait to read more and to see how this develops. Update soon please! :)
The point of view is totally different than usually! I really like how Frank's talking to Mikey. Plus the fact that they're four is just so gosh darn adorable! My guess is that they'll get older as each chapter goes on? I can't wait! I'm totally looking forward to reading the rest of this story <3
It sounds like a repeat but never read a Frikey either! But like the above comments explain, you're an amazing writer so anything you write is worth reading!!! Cute 1st chapter, they are so f~ing adorable as 4 year olds! Anyways update and I'll read
so cute *-----* first Frikey I have ever read (: and I'm not regretting :3 your story is amazing, and I just have to do one more thing before I leave this page... "click!" ah, now I'm subscribed :3 just keep up the good work (:
tons of bloody messy muffin chemical echelon para-love «3
I'm not usually one for Frikey, but maybe that's because I've never really given it a shot. I thought, since I really love the way you write, and had loved all of your stories to date, that if I'm going to start reading Frikey, yours would be the best place to start! This first chapter was so amazing, how is it that you can write such excellent first chapters? I mean, all of your chapters are great, but you have such a great way of starting things off. Your first chapters are the best of any I have read. This story is so adorable, so sweet and I'm excited to see where it will go! :D