Keep Your Girl Out of My Shoe Cabinet, Your Wife - Comments

ugh! it was only a matter of time before Becky came back, things would going to good between them!
I love it <3, cannot wait for more!!!

Beckey needs to go fall off a cliff or something.

I was disappointed, but not surprised, that Becky has re-entered the picture. But I think the fact that Sid was pissed about Viv going to New York proves that he cares where she is and what she is doing.

The "house hunting" was very sweet and I keep thinking they are growing closer every day. I feel some drama coming on - hopefully something that will force Sid and Viv to admit their feelings for each other. And not something where the baby will be in jeopardy.

Waiting not so patiently for an update!

please update again soon. i love this story and don't like the long time in between the updates. i hope he gets rid of the girlfriend

I hope Sidney wakes up soon and realize that he is actually in love with Viv and not Becky... I think may be when the baby is born Becky may get jealous because of all the time he will be spending with the baby or it way end up the other where he is always with Becky when the baby is born...mhmmm!!!!!!
Great chapter, cannot wait for more love it <3

Why do I think we have not seen the last of Becky - although I wish we had! I love Sid and Viv together and I hopw that Sid figures out that she is what he needs

Yay! Thank god there's no Sid's girlfriend in this chapter! Wheee...! The banner is cute! I like the pregnant girl pictures! Update soon! XD

Wait so is becky and Sid broken up?! That would be awesome. Oh and Sid needs to be a little more compassionate and not call his child a 'kid' he should call it a baby. It would be way sweeter! (:

I cant figure this out - is he a douche or is he sweet? I hope Sid falls for Viv and dumps Becky.

I really love this story - hope there is another update soon!

I love it when Sidney is right sweet and everything towards Viv but I hate how he treats her when Becky is around, I hope Viv has a little girl so then she can be daddy's little girl... :)
cannot wait for more, love it <3

Welcome back! I really don't have and criticism on your writing.. But hey, it's good to see you back! XD Just minor spelling error..

He needs to dump Becky and act like that to vivane all the time

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what a douche, i would've punched him right then and there. then outed him. id get sympathy and he'd be hated. :] but he's cute. update again soon!!!!!!!!!

BTW, didn't know I was so hot ;)

Love it!
Sidney really is a douchebag. She should dump his ass right away. I would.

Anyway, keep it up!!

Sid is really pissing me off. I want to spit apon him.

I was sooo suckered in that Sid actually cared for Viv - he remembered all of her favourites from when they were younger, and was so sweet on the plane.

But that was nasty when Becky was waiting in Maldives for him - poor Viv.

NICE! That's 3 chapters in a week! I'll inbox you some typing error occurred in your chapter although it isn't that much now~ Just a few. Will help you anyway I can, starting from this chapter seeing that the first 10 days of June is a busy time for me since exams date are just a day apart. But I will still have time to read and comment and help you if possible. XD Uh, I'm gonna rant about Sid now, he's a jerk but a handsome jerk in this story! LOL. And I was thinking whether Viv was planning on kicking him in the balls for his part-time habit/girlfriend issues or not. LOL.

What a guy..... I loved him in this chapter, still a jerk, but a hot, ironic jerk !