Reinvent Love - Comments

I liked this (:

This was good! I love all the emotions the girl in your story went through and you managed to write them really powerfully. You also wrote their relationship very well. Your writing style is very intriguing, it kept me reading on for sure! Well done! =)

Hello :) Told you I'd be back!
So the layout is a little boring, but simple, and simple layouts are always the way to go (don't want anything too overwhelming, right?) and even though the colors don't really go together, they do in a way. So I liked it.
The story content was unlike anything I've ever read. To be honest, I stick with fanfictions, so this was a nice change. I loved the feelings and emotions that were clearly running back and fourth between the two characters and how much you captured the fact that they were truly in love and inseperable.

Really good. :) Keep it up!

So when I found your comment swap thingie, i didn't expect it to be anything like this, but i really liked it! the emotions that the girl went through were intense, but the love that they shared was beautiful, even if she didn't want to admit it.

good job!(:

Comment Virginity!

Alright so the layout is a little clashing, but not in that bright overwhelming way which is a REALLY good thing. I really liked the story iteslf though. There were a few grammar mistakes towards the middle that you might want to look over, but they don't really take away from the story. I liked the charcters and the way that they interacted. I liked how they were with each other and just the darkness and love and hate there is there with them.