keep going keep going keep going! only criticism is wanting longer chapters again - great otherwise! ps - i love that you include links to her outfits too
So far so good keep writing. And not to be mean I think the word memorize is meant to be mesmerize? But good none the less good and just a harmless suggestion :) Hope you update soon
I just found this story today and I really like it, i hope you update soon, i can't wait to see where it goes and its nice to see Max in a different role other then a womanizing playboy