So far, I like it. Comment swap seems to be giving me quite a few genres or types of stories I like much, though. Your writing is very neat and easy to read. And this layout is very simple and beautiful. Even though this isn't a story I'd typically read, I'd like to see where it goes(:
That was one great Prologue! oh and I just loved the last line "if he lived to be a hundred years old, he would never forget her. " I can´t wait ´till you update!
Even though this isn't a story I'd typically read, I'd like to see where it goes(: