Athazagoraphobia: The Anguish of the Doll - Comments

Angel-VS-Demons (100)

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I really felt bad for the doll when I read this. It made me want to take her to my home. This was well written, so good job!

August 1st, 2011 at 07:30pm

Weezze (100)

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Thanks for including the definition of Athazagoraphobia, I would have had no clue otherwise.

I like your writing style.

Great personification.

This was a great read, thanks.

March 1st, 2011 at 06:01pm

onlyimagine33 (100)

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This was awesome. I really enjoyed reading this :)
Really original and unique.

March 1st, 2011 at 12:42am

Kateland c: (100)

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I liked this story alot c: I hope you win your contest! :D

February 28th, 2011 at 02:56am

CivilAnimosity (100)

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But it was good :D
I liked how you used the phobia :D

February 28th, 2011 at 02:49am

CivilAnimosity (100)

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many a part of her chipped, and cob webs arcing between her
1. many parts of her(?)
2.arching

Maybe space it out a little bit more?

He, being a gentleman, looks away.

February 28th, 2011 at 02:49am