This should definitely be a story, girl, omg. And now you have me using internet lingo on a site that's supposed to be 100% grammatically correct. You see the things you do to me? And now I'm rambling about nothing, anyway, this is good, you should totally finish it. I sound so much like a 12 year old girl, I don't even know what's happening to me. And now the comment that makes no sense is over, bye.
Even though it's short, there's a lot of emotion in this. It is cute, as the person above me said, too. I also like how you left a lot to the imagination; this could be a wicked awesome prologue to a story, but it stands alone as well. :)