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  • KatelynKeen

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    That's cute, innocent and dirrty! I love it. The mix of both characters is the cherry on top! Now excuse me while I daydream of this and ignore that I am at work. Very Happy
    August 27th, 2014 at 11:39am
  • Nia_Flores

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    A year later I read this one shot & I thought it was fantastic. Just wanted to let you know!
    January 6th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • Undead Angel

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    Nice story, I liked this. Only thing that could use some work was the fact that it didn't seem very realistic to me if that makes any sense. Thanks for entering, good job! :)
    March 3rd, 2011 at 12:43am
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