This is a pretty good story, but it is a little hard to follow. I hardly ever know who's POV the story is being told from because their is no name at the top. The readers have to figure it out and it is kind of hard.Could you please put the name of the person at the top of the chapter who's POV it's from? That would really help all your readers. Thanks.
I was just reading ad reading and than bam, no more chapters. ..I almost cried. . .You have filled my addiction for something different with a hint of violence and of course Avenged Sevenfold. I know you are busy but I hope you get the time to update soon!!!
Good story so far, but you do know you spelled Brian's name wrong in the earlier chapters, right? You also have a few other mistakes, but there easy to fix. Other then thay, I'm in love with the chapter and the story. Please update soon.