It's a Good Year for a Murder - Comments

  • sleepymermaid17_

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    Please come back and update!!!
    April 2nd, 2019 at 03:31am
  • January Rose

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    This is a pretty good story, but it is a little hard to follow. I hardly ever know who's POV the story is being told from because their is no name at the top. The readers have to figure it out and it is kind of hard.
    Could you please put the name of the person at the top of the chapter who's POV it's from? That would really help all your readers.
    Thanks.
    April 29th, 2013 at 02:56am
  • shortygirl

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    Please update soon or let me know if its active or not
    July 15th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • Aurielle

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    So it's one in the am, my eyes are killing me because i stared at the computer screen to long but I had to finish the story. I like it
    February 25th, 2012 at 07:51am
  • strawberryshortcake

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    update soon! i like this.
    February 4th, 2012 at 08:45am
  • Star Angel

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    more please love this
    February 4th, 2012 at 07:47am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Haha I like how you incorporated that lyric.
    February 4th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Um, yes this is amazing! Hope to read more soon! <3
    February 4th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • shortygirl

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    *handle the truth
    February 4th, 2012 at 01:45am
  • shortygirl

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    Shit you have a busy life

    Johnny of course he's gona make a good point. hopefully she can the truth
    February 4th, 2012 at 01:45am
  • shortygirl

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    update soon please
    February 2nd, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • AimiAiko

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    I was just reading ad reading and than bam, no more chapters. ..I almost cried. . .You have filled my addiction for something different with a hint of violence and of course Avenged Sevenfold. I know you are busy but I hope you get the time to update soon!!!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:30pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    HMMM!
    January 1st, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • shortygirl

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    Is that his sister....short but sweer
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • FallOutGirl;

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    Keep updating! DX

    I'll stop procrastinating and update my A7X story if you do! :D <3

    I love it so much X-X

    Zacky gives me butterflies
    December 18th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    TATTOOOOOOOO'S! =D
    December 7th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • Issues

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    Good story so far, but you do know you spelled Brian's name wrong in the earlier chapters, right? You also have a few other mistakes, but there easy to fix. Other then thay, I'm in love with the chapter and the story. Please update soon.
    December 6th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Short:(
    December 5th, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • shortygirl

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    She had a night terror and she feels bad? There probably confused shitless right now
    December 5th, 2011 at 07:10pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Molto confuso.
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:07pm