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  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :)
    February 2nd, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • MissAlice0

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    Asdfghjklnslwbskxndlnsl this story. This chapter. I love it so much, update soon!
    February 2nd, 2012 at 02:41am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    Tori is a bitch grrr
    That was a good chapter :D
    Update soon please
    January 30th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • James_Moriarty

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    HA TORI!!
    How's it feel to be shot down??
    POW!
    January 28th, 2012 at 06:45pm
  • SpencerG

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    Tori and her little friends need to be beaten!!!!! *gasps* You should let me jump in your story from time to time to randomly attack them. *grins evilly* I wanna cripple Tori!!! Not permanently though but still!!! *pouts and gets on knees* Please? *le puppy face*
    But Ivory and Rev are getting intimate!! *winks and giggles*

    Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! But until then... ^_^
    January 27th, 2012 at 10:49pm
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    Love this story!!! Keep updating!!!
    January 23rd, 2012 at 01:27am
  • aep59454

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    I dislike girls like Tori with a HUGE passion! >=/ But I hope everything turns out okay. Ivory needs a fairy tale ending too!

    Love the update, so please keep writing! <3
    January 22nd, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • SpreadYourSails

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    Wow this is an amazing story. . I don't read stories much on this website, so that means a lot coming from me, haha :P I love that you were able to twist in the eye contact thing, because I'm really interested in that subject in Psychology. Anyway, great job. I'm impressed.
    January 21st, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • SpencerG

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    I wanna fucking murder Tori and the other fucking whores who are trying to break Rev and Ivory up!!!
    Let me in your story so I can!!! Or at least let me threaten them and then carry out my threat!!!! *le puppy face*

    Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! But until then... ^_^
    January 21st, 2012 at 09:44pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    I want to smack Tori in the teeth
    HOW COULD SHE DO THAT?!
    January 21st, 2012 at 04:18pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    Grrrr stupid Tori
    January 21st, 2012 at 03:06am
  • GrimmOSauris

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    go to fucking hell Tori!
    January 21st, 2012 at 12:32am
  • MemoriesMakeMe

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    Love love love!
    January 17th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    I cant wait until the next chapter!
    January 15th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • James_Moriarty

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    just saw at the top that there's gonna be a sequal!!
    so happy :D
    and I love the banner for it too!!
    January 14th, 2012 at 11:49am
  • aep59454

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    Amazing update! Keep up the good work! =D
    January 14th, 2012 at 12:34am
  • aep59454

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    I LOVED the update! =)
    Please keep writing and posting!
    <3
    January 12th, 2012 at 01:58am
  • amandap

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    loved it!!!...please keep posting!!!!
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • SpencerG

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    The gift the girls got Ivory was sooo thoughtful!!!!! *awww's*
    *laughs* She got him a spider thing! Wait, what exactly was it? Was it a fake spider or a real spider?
    Damn Rev!! Couldn't let Ivory use her present for a whole twenty-four hours, uh? *giggles*

    Anywhoo!! This is an excellent chapter!!! I can't wait to read more!!! But until then... ^_^
    January 7th, 2012 at 08:27pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    I love the way that they're such a close family!
    January 7th, 2012 at 01:58pm
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