Paper Crane - Comments

So glad you commented on my blog! I want to read more of your stuff! I know this is an older story but it stuck out to me for some reason.
It's such a beautiful story and it conveys so much in so little words. The idea of having the park as a place of importance is beautiful to me. Thanks again for commenting on my blog! I'm gonna read some more of your work!

Wow. This is really beautiful writing. It sounds really heartfelt and genuine. I love how such a short story conveys all that it needs to. Nothing else really needs to be said. Also, the layout is perfect for the story. Simple and elegant. I'm going to try and read more of your writing when I have the chance.

The simplicity of this really works for it. It's very sweet, and you've handled the ambiguity wonderfully.

eyes the same color as the sky I really love that imagery.

The simplicity is spectacular, and I enjoyed the symbolism.

Wow. This was beautiful. I loved how the layout was simple and pretty, and the story was really gorgeous. You said so much in so few words, and the end, to me, seems a bit more ominous than hopeful, so I'm assuming that he died.

And it made me so sad, you don't even know.

I liked the description about his eyes, but I'd like to see more of that description. It seems like you'd be good at description, but altogether, the story was very well done. I loved it, and I'm definitely reading more of your stuff :D

I love this,WRITE MORE PLEASE <3

This feels familiar I might have read it before/ I really like this and the imagery is very strong. I feel like it's touching but could reach out more if it appealed to other visual effects like touch or sound. But maybe also it's simplicity is what is key.

I really think this is beautiful. The description really had me breathless and the amazement continued throughout the story. I loved it and there's really not much else to say! (:

This is adorable yet sad. I like the imagery and I love your writing style.

This is so freaking amazing it's ridiculous. Your writing style is unique in the sense that there's not very many words to what you write, but I can still picture everything so vividly; it's really interesting. I love how there's no dialogue between the two of them but you can still hear them (if that makes sense). I don't even know how to describe this other than absolutely brilliant<3

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But, but, I want him to live.

You made me love the characters even if there weren't many words, and it takes a pretty darn good writer to be able to do that. <3

I absolutely loved the simplicity of this. Great job. <3 (:

I love the way you write, but its frustrating that it ended like that! xD but the shortness just makes it....more meaningful, almost? Youre a great writer.

First of all, I love the simplicity and the shortness of this. It makes you think and it's sad in a sweet, heartbreaking kind of way. I absolutely adore that last paragraph - this is definitely a good way to end the perfect one-shot.

Yes, I also want to know what happens. This is just an extremely sweet and sad story all together. Poor girl, and how saddening it is that she's losing hope of ever seeing him again. Though, I do strongly suggest a zombie story, I think that finding out about their relationship would be even better. I like sad romance stories! ;3

I want to know what happens!

I really liked this, even in one chapter it had me sniffling.
Just in case this ever evolves into more chapters...I'm subscribing :)

Are you seriously ending this here? I'm kidding, kind of, I know that this really only works this short but I really wanted to read more! I love the almost poetic feel to this, you have a way with words!