I just found this story, and I think that it is absolutely amazing.
You truly have a way with words, and I'm disappointed that I didn't find this story earlier so that I could let you know that at the end of every chapter (:
I don't believe that I've read any of your writing before, because I generally read original fiction, but I can tell you right now that I will be looking into your other stories very soon (:
I hope you know that other people not being willing to look past your use of drugs doesn't mean you're not a good author, because you truly are.
I actually REALLY like this ending; I think it's cute, It could have been dragged out a little longer, but I understand that you were just ending it & kind of rushing, <3 I loved this whole story, & It's gonna be so hard finding a story that amounts to it!
Well I liked it. It might hav been a little rushed but no need to wipe your butt with it. I think you should give yourself a little bit more credit but whatever. Bye.
I think my heart stopped when I saw you updated <3 This is SO good </3 It breaks my heart she can't be with Stephen, but the love she has for John I feel like I can actually FEEL through this story. That's how I know you are an AMAZING writer, I can feel the mood you're trying to convey <3 I wanted to cry when I read that you would be ending this </3 I'm the same when it comes to my friends not knowing about my Mibba life, only one of my friends does, & it's still weird kindof talking to her about it . Ahahah. I'll be looking out for the last chapter & forsure comment <333
I'M SO EXCITED TO READ YOUR NEXT STORY<3(: You always got me as a reader!
I just realized how many hearts there were in this comment(:
I'm in love, I think it's stupid people were tweaking out about the drugs, I think that made the story SO interesting, I couldn't stop reading <3 Please update soon!
I think we are all just used to relationship drama that is superficial in stories. Here is a heavy subject that none of us really knew if we wanted to delve into. Now there's the slow turn around for the "love" part of the story. Keep writing because it's great.
I definitely say don't delete this story! I know you're upset with the negative response to the drug aspect of the story but I actually liked it. It made your story different, and as you said, it's not the main part of the story. It's just a detail that needs to be added in for the overall story.
Why? You should write because it feels good for you. Forget about what other people think. This is YOUR story. You should develop it as you best see fit.