If I Took Hold - Comments

I know this hasn't been updated in about a million years, but I think this is genius. Andrew Garfield and Jesse Eisenberg are just amazing, especially when you portray them. Their relationship seems so real to me, as well as the thoughts running through Andrew's mind. Keep up the good work, I mean, if you haven't already stopped.

Keep going, It's really good, and there aren't enough stories like this on here.