I love the girl's backstory and how she's stolen everything, signifying a new beginning for her. I just think it's a really neat idea, and your writing is super easy to read without being two-dimensional, like the symbolism of her journey out of her old town and old life. This could easily be transformed into a full-blown story. Awesome job. :D
This could easily be transformed into a full-blown story. Awesome job. :D