If I Have To Pull You Out Of The Wreckage, You Know, I'm Never Gonna Let You Go - Comments

WOW!!! You did good...........actually scratch that Lottie you did great! That was an amazing first chapter don't think I could have done anything as close to that if I tried. It was so intense!!

I can't wait for more! This is going to be an epic story!!!!

Holy jesus first chatper poor Alex is all i can say. I want to give his dad a piece of my mind and he's a fictional guy !!!!!!
Amazingly written however though the way you described just worked so well it was just brilliant.

My amazing best friend =]

Oh
My
Effin
God
Lottie?!
I was all 'Oh shit! Alex's Dad hit him!'
And then I was just sort of sat there like ':O:O:O:O:O:O'
Talk about saddness :(
Poor Lex!
I just wanna huggle him to death!
Mooore, soon?
but with happiness?
xo

Oh, that was so sad! I just wanna keep him and cuddle him and protect him from everything! I love it! Please write more xxx

bby, this looks so good!
Hurry up and post the first part!
I'll take back that phone call, forever! ;)
Naah, that'd probably kill you :P
HUURRY!
XO