I read the first chapter and I must say, it was interesting. The only thing I'd change is the length of the chapters because they're quite short. Other than that, your story is well written and attention grabbing.
Ouch... That lost comment was mean... But it was really good. I like it, but, can you explain how its a true story? Like, is this about someone you know? I'm not trying to be annoying but I'm just really curious... But good job :) (Oh and I just stole your comment board's virginity.)
she reminds me of me haha (minus the hooker part).
Loved the update (:
Update soon?