OMFG! This is amazing, my friend is always sending me little snippets from this and I finally got the link from her and I'm so glad I did :3 I love your writing style, if someone else wrote like this I'd slap them but you do it so well and it works perfectly. I'm actually at a loss for words to describe how much I love this so- duhabrkxbsknsjdjjjjn&;£8-!;8dhjwnxjsj!;&.)hejsdwjj!!
I enjoyed it. Immensely. Was sooooo good 8D. I very much enjoyed that sex scene, it was not awkward :) well....it would've been if my boyfriend was awake, he tends to read things over my shoulder xD
now that was entertaining. i don't know what your talking about, i think you did a swell job on that semi sex scene. and i really like your style of writeing. overall, i enjoyd it ;3
now, if somone were to ask for my permission to jerk off in my house, i'd tell'em 'fuck no. go outside and wank off over the porch you fucking animal' although, it being a Mr.Frank Iero...he can do whatever tickles his fancy.
Weee! I'm so glad you came back haha :) I think you totally nailed the sex scene, honestly ;D It was hot, but still cute in some parts, which is perfect :) And yes, Frank is indeed like porn haha I love the way you write; it seems really spontaneous to me, which makes it more real I think. Hope you are okay Ü I'll be looking forward to the next update.
AN UPDATE. WHATTTTT? A SEXY ONE NONETHELESS. Kay, so I read this in my homeroom class while my lesbian teacher was staring me down. xD I think she read some of it. OHWELL. Atleast she knows I'm straight xDDD <33 I thank you for the awkward moments to come with her.
that was actually quite amazing! it honestly was. I found it to be funny and kinky at the same time. Frank is so forward and cheeky, I can't believe he jizzed all over Gerard's face! that right there was epic! It also had really good descriptions and I loved the humor especially Frank asking if he can masturbate!! haha It was lovely! can't wait for the next update!!! xo
I don't think I've ever read a story where he actually came in his face... like, I read A LOT, hahaha, so... kudos for doing that. I loved this chapter, I love reading every update in Frank's voice with how he enunciates some words and exaggerates others, it keeps things interesting, haha. I love this, <3.
I love your writing style, if someone else wrote like this I'd slap them but you do it so well and it works perfectly.
I'm actually at a loss for words to describe how much I love this so- duhabrkxbsknsjdjjjjn&;£8-!;8dhjwnxjsj!;&.)hejsdwjj!!
UPDATE SOON!