Desirs de la Chair - Comments

  • kwon jiyong.

    kwon jiyong. (100)

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    HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG.

    I cannot even explain. That was amazing. You have this perfect way with words,
    and you can twist them and form them into any shape, forming masterpieces,
    and I envy it but at the same time I love it because I get to read stuff like this.

    Every description, every angle, every word used was beautifully strung together,
    and everything flowed so well, and it was just amazing and hot.

    This was definitely an amazing read and I absolutely love it. Happy face
    March 6th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • youngbae.

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    Happy face <---Me right now.

    That was glorious, and your writing style is as beautiful as ever.

    I especially liked this part, partially because it's amusing:
    "Call me Kamijo," he said, and he let his hand drift down her side, resting at her waist. "Yuuji-san implies too many years I don't want to admit to."

    And the end as well. I like the challenge in that.

    hnnnnnnnnng at the sex scene though. Happy face
    March 4th, 2011 at 03:59am