Fairy Tale - Comments

Oh my goodness... This story... This story... Is just amazing. I've read 100's of fanfictions and I cant recall very many that have made me cry... And when they did.. They were long ass stories that made you attached to the characters. This story, only being 4 chapters.... And it made me want to bawl my eyes out... and if my bro wasnt in the next room I would have, but I really dont need to be made fun of any more today :P But I just have to say, you are a very talented writer. It takes a natural born writer to be able to move their readers like you did. Amazing story. <3

beautiful ending i loved how they looked back on times when Matt was still alive and kicking. i can see him freaking out about the car lol, you did a great job with this ending

I've been reading fan-fics for god knows how many years, and not once has any of them made me cry like the 3rd chapter did. :(
I loved the whole thing, one of the best father daughter fan-fics I have read in a very very long time :} x

Wow I teared up when I got reading this chapter!
I mean after her dad passed away, her old feelings for Ethan rekindled because he was there to comfort her and now they are married.
And they have a little one on the way too, but they won't let anyone know until they come back from their honey moon.
And all the Avenged Family are there for her and Brian taking the role of being her father.
Matt is proud of her because she finally got her fairy tale ending she wanted.
Amazing story despite it being only four chapter!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I seriously need a tissue right now. So sad.

OMG I need a tissue!
So within the past year, she ended a abusive relationship, having a miscarriage and losing her father.
Man Matt singing to her before he had to leave to go to the afterlife.
Kinda reminds me of that music video but Nickelback, 'Never Gonna Be Alone'.
But least Matt is going to be there for her, watching over her and she is going to get her fairy tale ending!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

*raises hand for tissue* yes please!

I need one...i was fine with matt dying up until he started to sing. my uncle did the same thing to me a day before he died.

That had to be the most hardest conversation to have with your father, first being about pad and the other being about sex...that took a lot from her to tell matt and I'm happy to see that he didn't flip out on her. He's a great dad and i can see that he loves his daughter very much.

OMG this chapter made me laugh so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
The flashback when she first got her monthly and Matt is just completely confused!
Well at least she told Matt that she did have sex and Matt reassured her that it's alright despite her age, at least she did it with someone she cared and loved for.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Aw the first chapter is so cute!!!!! X3
Matt and the rest of the guys teaching his daughter that all guys are jerks!
She is so CUTE!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD