I really like this. Your simple language really gets across the true meaning of this and it makes it more relatable for the reader. I loved the repetition of the word crying, it fitted in nicely and wasn't over used. I thought the end sentence about 'him' was really effective and a nice ending. Well done.
Your simple language really gets across the true meaning of this and it makes it more relatable for the reader.
I loved the repetition of the word crying, it fitted in nicely and wasn't over used.
I thought the end sentence about 'him' was really effective and a nice ending.
Well done.