Love's Horrid Fruit - Comments

*applause*
Very good!
I got all excited when I saw that you updated. ^_^

:D this is an awesome story.
I really like it! :)
can't wait for more.

Oh, nawww. I think your Hermione was real close to home. The only thing I would suggest is try to incorporate her thoughts more into the narration. With Malfoy, he was always inserting his smarmy remarks into everything he observed, but with Hermione it was more of just what she saw the other characters doing. Of course, Malfoy, being the arrogant, good-looking prat he is, the voice comes easy. Sensible Hermione needs a bit more coaxing to come out of her story shell.

Ah... It says that you're more attuned to the bad boy lol.
I thought your Hermione was rather brilliant.
I especially love how you had Ginny plant the thought of Draco being cute in Hermione's head.
My only suggestion is to check for spelling mistakes.
I didn't find many, but I'm an English major in college so I catch the little things.
Loved it!
Avidly waiting for the next update.
And for a little shameless self promotion... Check out my Draco story.
Link is in my signature.

This is great so far. I love it. You're Draco is perfect, much better than mine I must admit.

This is really pretty good, and the chapter is just the right length, too. Argh, continue it! I must read more. You do a very accurate Draco. :)

Oh, and I liked how you conveyed the outline of who Malfoy is and what his life is like in the first chapter, which is hard to do without looking like you're trying to hard for it, especially in the very beginning of the story.