Here To Stay - Comments

i think it's a bit too much like the movie Raise Your Voice. It was almost like the movie turned into a short book with only slightly different things.

It's nicely written though.

I think that this is the best two-shot that I have ever read. I honestly started crying reading the second chapter. Amazing job(:

You little asshole!!!! Gah, that is all I can think right now.... BUT, this was amazing and a great two shot and just amazing. Did I say amazing? Yes, I did. No words can form right now. Off to watch Raise Your Voice now :)

This is amazing so far. Losing someone is hard. Talking about them is even harder. But acting like they don't exist isn't just in this world. I can relate to Lori a bit but it was my grandfather... and possibly my father now =/ Anyways, this is really just a brilliant piece of work.