People on Streets - Comments

  • Unexpected.

    Unexpected. (100)

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    I don't know why, but I loved this. I don't even understand half of it, but I love it.
    February 1st, 2012 at 03:11am
  • fairyfeller

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    I don't know why I haven't commented on this yet.

    This is the first WWRY fanfic I've ever seen, actually. I've seen the musical a couple of times, but have never seen a fanfic of it before now. So kudos to you for introducing me to a good fanfic of a good musical.

    The pacing of this is really good. I like how Zack seems very unsure of Galileo and the Bohemians at first, and I like how it isn't until the end that he develops feelings for Gaz.

    “I don’t know, really. It’s something they used to say during the age of rock, I think.” Galileo shrugs. “I think it’s a compliment.”
    This made me laugh, it really fits Galileo's character from the musical, and how he still doesn't really know that much about rock history. It's rather endearing, really.
    March 10th, 2011 at 09:31pm