I've Done Something So Terrible - Comments

  • thisloveissober

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    Its sweet, though a little fast paced for me.
    I didn't really get the whole idea, but it sort of came to me in the end, of course.

    All in all, I thought it was sweet and cute :)
    I'm looking forward to reading your other stories ^^
    March 6th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • RejectionLetter.

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    So I like this a lot and I think you should continue posting more stories
    This is definitely a really sad story, but the ending is a really sweet one.
    I like how awesome the brother/sister relationship is potrayed. Siblings are seriouly the best of friends and there's no friendship like theirs, so I can understand why she was hurt.

    Great job [:
    March 5th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • RejectionLetter.

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    I'm still reading in the process of reading this, but I wanted to let you know some things [:
    If you are trying to italicize something do this:

    [ i ] type what you want italicized here [ / i ]

    So just do that, but remove the space in between the brackettes and the i's, of course, and then the result should be this:
    type what you want italicized here

    [: I shall continue reading now!
    March 5th, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • pariz98

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    Awsome Story!!!!
    March 5th, 2011 at 03:57am