A Place for Us - Comments

It's really, really good :) I'm subscribing.
Loved the first two chapters, and the third one was pretty good too :) x

hmmmmm it sounds interesting and the time frame is one of my favorites. i love the 50's and the whole greaser and poodle skirts and all that jazz. greese is STILL one of my favorite movies of all time.
im interested to see where you go with this so i subscribed. ^_^

Also, if I remember, I'll rec this story in my author's notes :)

*claps hands and jumps around in seat*

I actually really, really like this. It reminds me of The Outsiders (I'm a sucker for greasers, but gay greasers? Umph.)

I do think it's kind of confusing that the prologue is after the first chapter, and if you broke the paragraphs, that would make it look much better and it would be easier on the eyes. There are a few capitalization errors, but *waves hand around* this is great.

You expressed that you were worried because no one has commented/read/subscribed. Well, mibba is kind of weird and the story doesn't show up until forever and a day. So it's not that people don't LIKE it, they just haven't FOUND it yet, you know?

Anyway. This is wonderful. Greasers, oh my god. *swoons*

But yeah. If you spaced the paragraphs/fixed punctuation/did something with that prologue thing, this story would be even better.

<3