For All I've Known - Comments

Commenting because of the forum thread. I enjoy sweets har har

Anyways, Fall Out Boy is quality, though.

This was very... werid. Different. But in a good way! Marie is such a developed character, I love her. And I can tell she cares about Pete.

Although this is a fanfic, it's actually, you know, very original. Heh. So good job on that! I don't really normally read Pete Wentz stuff, but this was just great. I really believe everything and can picture it in my head. Normally that doesn't happen, either. But I guess you're just that good a writer!

So really, great job!

OHAI I C U PETE WENTZ <3
You get bonus points because seriously, one of my favorite celebrities and lyricists. And I see you there lyrics from I Don't Care, ;3

It's sort of inception-esque, I like it. Just the way it reads is reminds me of it for some reason. Marie seems like an itneresting character, I dunno. I almost feel like some of this has such blocks of paragraphs that it's kind of hard for me to read. Still, I like how she's sort of a guardian type person and how she really does seem to care about Pete and suchery.

Lovely <3

<33 Pete!
I love the vocabulary you used.
Its really interesting.

OFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF COURSE IT'S PETE WENTZ(;
BUT GREAT! :D
I like it(;
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