While You Were Away - Comments

  • the conqueror

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    I think it's great that they're on the way to being friends again, even if Val had to force Amy, that actually shows that he really loves her. But I think is going to be much more complicated for Amy to mend things with her dad...
    I love Justin in this! He is so sweet and such a good friend!
    Great job girls!
    April 29th, 2011 at 12:48am
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    I'm loving this story so far. It's a very interesting concept and I really enjoy the way you guys write it :)
    March 30th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • sportsfanatic19

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    i love this story!! please keep updating!!
    March 22nd, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Liars' Pants On Fire

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    Pretty cute. I'm definitely not a Kings fan, since I'm a born and raised Stars fan, but I love the fact that Val has another story. (:
    March 21st, 2011 at 08:06am
  • starlight886

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    I wish there were more comments :( anyway I just caught up on the two chapters. I really loved them and I'm excited to see how them reuniting goes and even to see how the boys interact with one another.
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:56am
  • starlight886

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    I just read all this, and while I'm not really familiar with Val, I definitely know Jack Johnson and I'm loving this so far. The concept is definitely interesting.

    I cheer for my hometown team, the Vancouver Canucks. :)
    March 9th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • Bello Imperfections

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    Hey I Love this story i'm excited to see what happens next. Thank you for creating this story I love Jack Johnson and there isn't many stories of him so thank you so much.!!
    March 8th, 2011 at 03:05am