Green and Gray - Comments

So, I just started reading this and I'm really liking it (i'm on chapter 4) but I just think it is soooo weird that Sparrow accept to go out "all the time" with completly strange guys.

LOVED*

This story was SO cute and amazing!!!
I LVOED it!!!

hey! I read this story a couple days ago, and I forgot to comment, and I thought that was totally unfair, so here I am commenting.

I loved the story, I love your writing style. It's ridiculously awesome! It captivated me into each character, and hell as long as JohnOhh is involved, you got me hooked :p

I would be torn between the seemingly perfect boy with the British Accent and the hot genuine guy in that one band that's so awesome and has that angel-like raspy voice :p keep writing! I hope to read more from you!:D

oh its over D= thats terribly saddening...
oh well loved it...
and you are aware his father's name is John too right? as John is the 5th ... just saying. loved the story i'll miss it

hopefully he comes and sweeps her away for her away for her birthday. that would be nice :D

One word to explain this whole story: WOW.
Just wow.
I can not believe it's over.
I am tempted just to read it over again, but this story is just...perfect.
The ending was just perfect and John, oh John, he's just perfect.
But John and Sparrow together, simply put everyone else to shame.
Such a perfect ending, for a perfect story.
Can't wait for more from you.
(:

I spent the last four hours reading this and, oh my, this story is wonderful! It's a shame I caught it at the end but I think this is superb! I hope you post the last two chapters and not just the epilogue. Also, another JohnOh story by you is on my wish list!

I have been looking for a good story to read for months now and haven't been able to find one. Thank God for this! Really entertained me. I love it. <3

SUCH a good story...my goodness. If you already have the next two chapters written, then just post em for shits and giggles! SIberia is fantastic, couldn't agree more. And TAI...news killed me too :(
Post soon and have fun in Hawaii!-So jealous!

I fail at commenting, I know this.
But I do love this story.
These two are just too cute to not want to read about.
I call them 'Johnrow' - it makes perfect sense in my head haha.
And now that it has almost come to it's end, I'm quite upset about it.
But I have loved this story since I have started it reading it.
You are an AMAZING writer, I can't wait to read more from you.
:D

sorry it took me forever to reply i've been busy, but but omg your ending it D: NOOOO damn it. so good.

i LOVED this chapter. the way john loved that baby was soooo cute! they're such a good couple :)

NO ADSKJGHK DON'T GO DSKJGK I NEED THIS STORY IN MY LIFE.

The Academy Is... was one of the bands that I truly wanted to see live. It's on my bucket list, third from the top, and the first two were already crossed out, so I was so freaking excited, and was all, "IT'S DESTINY OMFG" then I got the news and... I cried. For hours. Don't judge me.

I'm saving my sappy end-of-story comment for when the epilogue comes out. This is the first time that I've actually witnessed a fanfic coming to an end right in front of my very eyes. I'm sort of looking forward to the epilogue, but obviously not looking forward to the end.

Well as much of a pain in the ass this was for you, i really liked it ;)

Totally need to find a guy like john who doesn't just want sex.....hahaha wish me luck on that one! They are so damn cute together! And I love how long your updates are! You are an incredible writer and I absolutely adore this story! Pleaseeeeeee don't give up! And post soon? :)

oh my lord he is so adorable, i wish i had a boyfriend like that.
you dont need to apologize it was so worth the wait, i checked my emails every day hoping you had updated.
but i can completely understand the inspiration thing, i've been so out of it lately with school finishing and all the stress of passing and getting into the uni course i want and making my mum proud, it so stressfull. i hope things get better for you i really do <3

Love this story, hope I see another chapter soon! I know how you feel about losing the inspiration and not really wanting to post right now. Thats how I'm feeling too. Hope your motivation for the story comes back though, I love reading this.

i know how you feel, life just seems to suck all around lately. don't give uppp :)
you're an awesome writer. i love how long your updates are and i love your taste in music!
and i loved that bit where john was baking for her! guys that can cook are just so attractive... >///<

Sparrow and John are so cute together.