Disengage - Comments

thecitylights (100)

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Please update this story :(

December 27th, 2012 at 12:23pm

Nia_Flores (100)

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I just read this & I think it's amazing. Not the typical girl-goes-away-and-comes-back-and-kisses-the-boy-she-left-and-they-were-happy-forever-after. I think it's nice twist. Great job.

November 13th, 2011 at 08:45am

pawnsinplay (100)

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I love this! It's beautiful. It would make an amazing story if you keep it going, but it's also amazing just the way it is as a oneshot. <3

May 13th, 2011 at 01:56am

fuuyeahEva (100)

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Oh my gosh, you should so make this into a story! (:
But if you don't that's ok, cause it works as a one shot.

March 24th, 2011 at 11:13pm

once more.radio nerd (100)

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I really liked it! I hope you make it into a story.

March 18th, 2011 at 02:07pm

once more.radio nerd (100)

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I really liked it! I hope you make it into a story.

March 18th, 2011 at 02:07pm

livingproof. (100)

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I'm like loving this <3

March 12th, 2011 at 07:27am

blondenlovinit (100)

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I love it!
I hope you keep this story going.

March 11th, 2011 at 08:51am

ilovetoast (100)

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I like this! Please keep going. I'm subscribing right now!

March 8th, 2011 at 10:53pm

YourFavoriteMistake (100)

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I really like this. Please turn it into something more!

March 8th, 2011 at 08:40am

Laobows! (100)

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I love this story!!!!

March 7th, 2011 at 12:55am

la dispute. (100)

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I love this so far!
I feel so bad for Avery, but then again, John has a right to feel the way he does.
I really hope you decide to turn this into a story! :)

March 6th, 2011 at 12:38pm

pikachuz. (100)

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okay, so um.
I love this, a lot.
John is just a god. <3
this story is amazing.
I'm looking forward to this continuing further. c:

March 6th, 2011 at 05:10am

originality is dead. (100)

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I love the plot so far, keep writing. c:

March 6th, 2011 at 05:08am