Like the Waves That Crash - Comments

@ Burn_The_Ashes
Thank you:) Yeah, the text has messed up a bit but I'm having some issues changing it as this was originally a two person project but they left Mibba and made the layout so I can't change it. I'd have to make a brand new one and I'd lose the banner which they made which I really love. Thank you for the lovely comment though!:)

Okay, to start with, I love ATL, so this already cool. I like that your layout is super simple but really appealing to the eye, but the font for the text is a little difficult to read, especially considering I have awful eyesight. The actual story immediately sets the scene, and the concept itself is beautiful. I'm aware this is on hiatus but regardless, this is good :)

The banner and layout is cute but the spacing needs to be changed to make the story readable. It was really cute and I love the classic nerd and popular guy high school story. I just wish the words weren't so cramped together. I really did enjoy what my eyes could take in though! Just change the text spacing and your golden.

So, here I am from comment swap, and...
I didn't manage to actually read your story.

The layout is pretty, for sure, and the concept of "life without love" is brilliant because many of these stories revolve entirely around the main characters' love affairs. I wish I could have read more than halfway through the first chapter, because I loved what I read.

The text in the layout is too close together, and it makes the story impossible to read. You might want to get that adjusted, because it detracts from the wonderful work you've done here.

This was a pretty good story. It was very well written and enjoyable to read.

The layout is absolutely beautiful, though the writing was a little bit too small for my poor eyes x3

The banner is well done too~

You're a very good writer, so keep up the work. <3

I came here from Comment Swap~
I think you should change the layout because the font is so small I can't really read it to see if it's good. That might just be because I'm half-blind from the sun haha. It's pretty good from what I can see doe~

Great update!
Loving it so far. :) Can't wait to see how it progresses.

A mi también! :D
(Me too)
Can't wait to read more!

This sounds really interesting. Can't wait to see how it turns out. :)