Stage Secrets - Comments

  • waves wash

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    This was cool. The main character reminds me of a classmate I use to have.
    September 23rd, 2011 at 05:05am
  • Painter's Dream

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    Ok, this was amazing. I could imagine the fans screaming his name, I could imagine him singing and I could imagine the tour bus (:
    This was FAR from crappy, dearie <3
    and I love how you say he still had slightly feminine looks since most rockstars do aha (:
    I enjoyed this with a passion <33
    May 30th, 2011 at 02:00am
  • Teddi Manni

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    I love this. It was crappy at all. I'm not normally into lack if dialogue or celebrity originals, but this is well written and deserves a butt load of comments<3

    I also like how you keep readers guessing and don't tell the secret until the very end. Somewhere in the middle I was thinking Zach was a transvestite. Ha.

    You could actually continue this story and I'd definitly sub<3 so much drama could happen!

    I Eespecially loved the line: The fans ate it up, and he could feel the energy pouring off them like the potentially lethal radiation coming from a running microwave.

    I just thought it was a good line.

    Fantastic job!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 02:39am
  • teen spirit.

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    Why haven't I read this before? :O
    I honestly haven't read a story on Mibba about a transgender and I really did adore this.
    It just tells us how the media is, and you described it very well.

    Amazing job. (: <3
    May 23rd, 2011 at 02:31am
  • hadesjagger

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    I absolutely loved this. It was so interesting, and insightful on the pressures of a celeb. I always thi k that they are forced to be what people want them to be, rather than what they are.

    I loved it.
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • Kate's In Wonderland

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    :P This is cool
    'He grasped the microphone like a lifeline, wondering briefly what he would do without it.'
    Loved that line, I love the whole idea.

    At the start i was like what's his secret... But really I should have been asking What's HER secret?...
    Really cool ^^
    March 10th, 2011 at 07:23am