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  • thisloveissober

    thisloveissober (100)

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    You know...

    Its probably a crime not to use a tissue box with this story.
    March 6th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • second-hand smoke

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    This is really sad. You really got your message across and I hope things to get better for you.
    I think this story could be even better if it was written in first person (from your point-of-view) to put the reader's in your shoes and help them feel what you felt. You definitely have the skills to do so. Keep writing :)
    March 5th, 2011 at 11:22pm
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