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  • Ms.Plague

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    The drill instructor portion is past tense so she doesn't need to be a Sgt. Anymore. Thanks though :) I will check it to make sure I didn't mess up.
    July 4th, 2012 at 08:16am
  • If.You.Be.My.Star.

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    I haven't read it yet, but I was looking at the chacters and Marin needs to be a sergeant for her to be a drill instructor. Just letting you know, not trying to be a bitch about it(:
    July 4th, 2012 at 05:46am
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    Thanks for the lovely comments people :) ^_____^ you guys keep me sane <3
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:08pm
  • SpencerG

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    Every time I hear So Far Away I cry. Like I bawl my eyes out. It sucks... *sighs*
    *giggles* That bit about the kid wanting to ride Carmen and Shadows holding that sign is adorable and funny *laughs* I would like to see that in real life *laughs*

    Anywhoo!! This is a good chapter!! I can't wait to read the next one!! But until then... ^_^

    P.S.: I hope you and the things going on in your life get better!! *gives you a hug*
    And I'd pissed if I lost that natural, awesome Cali bronzer! *giggles*
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • MamaZ

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    Matt is going to be crushed when he finds out she doesn't remember him or herself....or any of her friends for that matter. It was such a cute update until the crash, is it bad that I chanted "Oorah, Semper Fi, Do or Die, KILL KILL KILL" as I read it? Man Gunny has really gotten that stuff stuck in my head. lol
    November 30th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • MamaZ

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    You just take your time and get yourself right. I want you full and well when you write this girlie, you know that. I'm sorry to hear that so much crap has happened to you, if I lived near you I would gladly give you my room 'cause you're just that freaking awesome and I love you like a sister! Hope everything works out for the best love
    November 29th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • Theatreislife

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    Please please please update soon.
    October 14th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • punkstar102

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    Holy Crap!!! Amazing mature content, lol. and Matt has to have a horse cock. anywho.... I can't want to see the next update. :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • Clik

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    Oh my gosh ! You have no idea how much respect I have for this story . Truly amazing .
    I was going to comment on wert single chapter , but I thought that may have been a little annoying .. There are no words in which I can describe how amazing this is .

    You are amazing .
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:21pm
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    Oh my gosh ! You have no idea how much respect I have for this story . Truly amazing .
    I was going to comment on wert single chapter , but I thought that may have been a little annoying .. There are no words in which I can describe how amazing this is .

    You are amazing .
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:20pm
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    Oh my gosh ! You have no idea how much respect I have for this story . Truly amazing .
    I was going to comment on wert single chapter , but I thought that may have been a little annoying .. There are no words in which I can describe how amazing this is .

    You are amazing .
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:20pm
  • MamaZ

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    brian would be the one to record matt having sex....that's not even right lol
    July 28th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • SpencerG

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    I aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww'd at that piece of you and your husband's first kiss as hubby and wifey!! ^_^
    July 28th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • SpencerG

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    Chapter twenty-fucking-nine!! HUGE FUCKING LADY BONER!! I mean Johnny Christ that was good!! *sniffles a moan*
    Adorable Fucking Stuffed Pitbull: Can I have him? Pretty please!! I'll hold him, and pet him, and feed him, take him for walks in the park, and hold him, and give him a bath, and feed him. I promise. *puppy eyes*
    asdgfhgjkhjhfg at the necklace. ASDGFHGJKHJHFG when the halves are put together to make a whole!!
    Papa Gates Screencap: "saaweeet!"

    Chapter Thirty!! Sweet mother of Tomo!! I would love to see that video! *winks*
    "'I HOPE SOMEONE MADE CONDOMS THE SIZE OF YOUR HORSECOCK MATT OR ELSE WE WILL BE SEEING LITTLE SHADOWS EVERYWHERE!'": fdjbsdckjbIDHBncb dnf cwek I can't even- *asdfghjkl;*
    July 28th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • girl meets girl

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    So I haven't started reading this but I will get to it soon,
    I promise! I just wanted to say that this is very original.
    I've never read a story that deals with someone the who
    was in the Marine Corps so this should be interesting!
    I actualy know someone who was in the Marine Corps,
    he's a very dear friend of our family. Anywho even though
    I don't listen to Avenged Sevenfold I'm still gonna read
    this :D
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:13pm
  • mistery gurl

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    hahahahahahahaha loved it :)
    especially the ending :)
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:04pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it, man she is gonna be shocked when he tells her he is staying for longer!!!
    i reckon he should just not say anything and the day that he has to leave, sleep in
    and shell freak out thinking hes gonna miss it :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! NOW PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!?!
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • MamaZ

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    this chapter was hot!! matt always makes naughty time good lol *wink wink* always ready to go more then one round, he's a strong guy isn't he? it put a smile on my face when Carmie told matt that it was her house they were in, it was sweet how he reacted.
    July 24th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • Aurielle

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    I can't get enough of this story! It is so good and well written and real. fan fic are total cliche's most of the time but your's isnt. It just real and really amazing. can't wait for more
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:40pm